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The Single Tear
Chapter Five

"She put him out like the burnin' end of a midnight cigarette
She broke his heart, he spent his whole life tryin' to forget
We watched him drink his pain away a little at a time
But he never could get drunk enough to get her off his mind
Until' the night
He put that bottle to his head and pulled the trigger
And finally drank away her memory…"

Ino choked on these painful words. All of her friends at the bar were astonished by her beautiful, yet undiscovered singing ability. She continued,

"Life is short but this time it was bigger
Than the strength he had to get up off his knees
We found him with his face down in the pillow
With a note that said, "I'll love her till I die"
And when we buried him beneath the willow
The Angels sang a whiskey lullaby

La la la la la la la, la la la la la la laa
La la la la la la la, la la la la la la laa"

Ino was on the brink of crying as the most painful part of the song for her to sing approached: her part. The part that explained her side of the whole ordeal. She began the second part,

"The rumors flew but nobody knew how much she blamed herself
For years and years, she tried to hide the whiskey on her breath
She finally drank her pain away a little at a time
But she never could get drunk enough to get him off her mind
Until' the night"

Sakura now realized the real reason why Ino chose this song. She had chosen it, not only because it was Naruto's favorite song, but because she had begun to love him too. Sakura bowed her head sadly as Ino continued singing,

"She put that bottle to her head and pulled the trigger
And finally drank away his memory
Life is short but this time it was bigger
Than the strength she had to get up off her knees
We found her with her face down in the pillow
Clinging to his picture for dear life
We laid her next to him beneath the willow
While the Angels sang a whiskey lullaby

La la la la la la la, la la la la la la laa"

"La la la la la la la, la la la la la la laa"

She waited for the instrumental to end,

"La la la la la la la, la la la la la la laa
La la la la la la la, la la la la la la laa"

As soon as the music ended, everyone in the bar cheered for Ino. Everyone except Sakura. Nobody except Ino noticed Sakura at the bar: crying. The song had made Sakura finally realized that Naruto was never coming back, to come smiling from ear- to- ear. Ino was the only one that knew why this was breaking Sakura's heart right in front of her. Sakura really, deep down inside, loved Naruto. Now, she would never get the chance to tell him that for real. To not  say it as a lie. Ino walked over to her and put her hand on Sakura's shoulder the same way Sakura had done to her earlier and said, "Why don't you come sleepover at my apartment tonight. We both need to talk." Sakura nodded at her with tear filled eyes. Ino helped her out of her stool, put her arms on the crying Sakura's shoulders, and walked out of the bar.
finally chapter 5! YAYZ!!! please tell me if i shud continue. imma be starting to type my new fic so i might just discard this one.

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:iconglp2814:
Please make some more, these are really good.
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:iconsascara-chan:
i thought bout doing that, but this was something i made like 2 years ago and i have developed more and just dont like this srry, but thank you for your support
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:icondemondragon1:
demondragon1 Mar 2, 2012  Student Photographer
....Holy crap....never been a fan of NaruIno but now....i am....
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:iconsascara-chan:
Funny thing is that after i wrote this crappy little thing i got into sakuino
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:icondemondragon1:
demondragon1 Mar 4, 2012  Student Photographer
xD ahaha.....
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:icondemondragon1:
demondragon1 Mar 5, 2012  Student Photographer
Not really xD
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:iconimelodii:
... i didnt like the ending. :/
suddenly its not about Ino and Naruto anymore, its all about Naruto and Sakura.
I think thats confusing and somehow makes the hole Story a bit ... i dunno .. strange.
But ich really liked the first parts and the song you've chosen really fits in. :)
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:iconsascara-chan:
as the great eminem replied to anderson cooper on 60 minutes" thats probly cuz i am crazy.." thanx for the advice. i thought of that too after this was posted, and it wud hav been better if she felt guilt for lying about loving him.and its weird to hav sum1 compliment the song, cuz only 3 other people that i no no that song, and theyre all frum my family. i cry when it comes on
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:iconngzugzj1997:
its an awesom fic! plz continue it :DD
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